Sunday, September 27, 2009

Behind Blue Eyes

The Who-Behind Blue Eyes

No one knows what its like Consonance +2
To be the bad man Alliteration +2
To be the sad man Assonance +2
Behind blue eyes Imagery +2

No one knows what its like Consonance +2
To be hated
To be fated
To telling only lies Alliteration +2

But my dreams Ambiguity +3
They arent as empty
As my conscience seems to be

I have hours, only lonely Characterization +3
My love is vengeance Metaphor +5
Thats never free

No one knows what its like
To feel these feelings Alliteration +2
Like I do
And I blame you Ambiguity +3

No one bites back as hard Alliteration +2
On their anger
None of my pain and woe
Can show through

But my dreams Ambiguity +3
They arent as empty
As my conscience seems to be

I have hours, only lonely Characterization +3
My love is vengeance Metaphor +5
Thats never free

When my fist clenches, crack it open Alliteration +2
Before I use it and lose my cool Assonance +2
When I smile, tell me some bad news
Before I laugh and act like a fool

If I swallow anything evil
Put your finger down my throat
If I shiver, please give me a blanket
Keep me warm, let me wear your coat Alliteration +2

No one knows what its like Consonance +2
To be the bad man Alliteration +2
To be the sad man Assonance +2
Behind blue eyes Imagery +2

Sophisticated Rhyme Scheme +5
Pervasive Mood +5
Social Relevance +5
Motif +5

Alliteration +2
Consonance +2
Assonance +2
Ambiguity +3
Characterization +3
Metaphor +5

Imagery +2
Emotionally Evocative +3
Expansive Range +5

Baseline: 50
Total: 97

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